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Demons

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Demons

The long dark road of many mind's stories
With the distant faux pas light at the end
With just one step it takes you there -
Escape from the demons that pursue you,
Snatched from their reaching claws.
But the demons have tricked you,
And as you are pulled into the nightmare from which none return,
The sound of their mocking laughter echoes in your ears.
Never give in to the need to escape for good,
For the ones you leave behind -
Are helpless, turned upon by the demons
That you left in the wake of your passing.
i actually wrote this with someone watching, in response to a sudden idea.

according to my usual preferences, it has never been edited.

enjoy, any criticism welcome.
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Thanks for sharing, something I gained from now...
hah, you've got skills to be able to write about what's "real"... I can't really write any good piece of what bothers me or people I care about. You should really go for the dream about being a novelist!